nice work! this was a really interesting piece. i feel like by including the fact that the old man was a serial killer at the end, it should have had more influence on the story (and perhaps who he was and what his limits were), but that’s overall a pretty small piece of feedback. this was fun to read and i appreciate your participation, thank you! i hope to see you in the next one!
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thanks so much! as for the end, i thought it would be funny and make it more blog-like if that serial killer thing was made-up. making him a random old bag instead had me laughing to myself more. glad you liked it tho. :)
nice work! this was a really interesting piece. i feel like by including the fact that the old man was a serial killer at the end, it should have had more influence on the story (and perhaps who he was and what his limits were), but that’s overall a pretty small piece of feedback. this was fun to read and i appreciate your participation, thank you! i hope to see you in the next one!
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Strange… but it held my attention nonetheless! Good work