i had no idea what was happening but it's all good. really sick and colorful art direction all around. real big fan of the music choice and the dialogue's sound design as well. i look forward to more.

a total bore. everything in this pilot got problems.

the pace of EVERYTHING was dragging. it didn't feel like there was a natural awkwardness in any scene where i was sure it was what you were trying to go for. it all felt stretched so it would feel more like a bigger scope rather than have any valid reason to be nearly 20 minutes.

even if it was in a length i'd consider reasonable, i'd still have problems with the dialogue and the story itself as it felt like a first draft with no clear tone or direction. literally nothing happens even for a slice-of-life type deal and the characters aren't entertaining enough to carry with their personalities because their writing is so one-note and unfunny.

the art style is also ridden with weird color and line weight choices. sometimes, background characters are purple or full color or abstract blobs and it makes no sense having those choices collide in one project. all three end up sticking out like sore thumbs. plus there are a ton of compositing inconsistencies. the light sources were unappealing and all over the place. plus, the character designs aren't very good nor do they fit together. some of them feel like they came from another animation and some, including one of the MCs, Clay, have ugly clashing colors.

i can't say too much about the voice acting cus they aren't the big problem. the big problem is the voice direction and the audio mixing which makes them either too loud, too quiet, too unfitting with what is going on, etc. the sound design was also a big problem. whole lot of meme sounds that didn't belong and felt like they were only put in because they're wacky, not because it'd enhance what was happening.

overall, this was a chore to sit through and i at least hope the next episode will have something worthwhile. not a good start to this project.

no joke hit for me except the corridor bit. yea i'm not a big fan of this dry, name-dropping humor but i still thought this was aight. your style works well in animation and the lesbians themselves got a cute dynamic. i'm interested in seeing more.

this came out great! kudos to everyone who helped make this happen! <3
also RIP just dance's dedication to the wii
(2009 - 2020)

really cute design she got

woah mama. love her design

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